- Allows your reader to navigate the scene
- They help build connections between the things in the scene
- They develop a 3D impression of your scene in the reader’s mind.
- They provide you with the ability to layer your scene and effectively ‘zoom in’ on it.
- When you use this technique, think of yourself as a camera, moving in closer to the selected object. Siad object would need to be important to the scene as a whole.
| In the exact middle Onto a tube-shaped Hall like tunnel Without smoke With panelled Wound on and on Into the side of the hill As all – many miles around Opened out of it | One one side and then on the other On the same floor On the same passage The left-hand side (Going in) Over his garden Meadows beyond Sloping down river |
Behind the blinding light and the shy timid girl stands a skyline, of books. Surround by children’s books, old books, new book and nonfiction books. Inside the city, books live humans that love books to read.
